This is really cool! You've got talent that's for sure. I like how you managed to get good character moments and world building even in this short amount of time.
My critique is that the beginning comic panels, although really cool, are a bit confusing. Maybe starting with some quick establishing shots so the audience knows where the characters are in relation to each other and then jumping into the action.
Anyways keep on animating man, I look forward to what you do next!
I really dig your style, it fits the story being told really well. I like how you just let the visuals and the music tell the story, it completely worked because I was hooked from beginning to end. I'd be interested in seeing you do some kind of sequel but if not, I look forward to seeing what you do next.
Thank you! I really appreciate it. I actually do have a sequel in mind, but I have a few projects I want to do first before I tackle that.
The animation, art and shot choices are really great. I think that there's some shots here that could be held for just a few frames longer, such as that close up of her eye, and that top down shot :08.
Keep working and improving, and I look forward to what you'll do next!
I really like how this turned out, the animation is smooth and the framing is nice. The background doesn't loop with the rest of the clip though, just something to keep in mind for future videos.
Keep creating man, I look forward to seeing what you do next.
I know what you mean, the lighting is slightly off as well. I don't usually do loops but I'm gonna work on those aspects anyway for the future animations. Thanks for the feedback! :)
This is the doom anime I didn't know I needed. You've got some serious talent, keep up the good work.
That's disgusting
I can't believe someone would actually put mushrooms on their pizza.
I just came here to say that the water animation at the end didn't have to be that well done but it was. I can only imagine the sweat and tears poured into that
This is some gorgeous art and animation. Plus it's 100% accurate
This was a surprisingly accurate depiction of the printer industry.
Careful man, you can't just upload the full movie to newgrounds like that.
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